Margin Notes: Deep Scene-by-Scene Analysis

Margin Notes That Light Up the Page

Unlock the potential of your screenplay with our Margin Notes service. This is the Lamborghini of coverage: page-by-page, scene-by-scene feedback from seasoned screenwriters who know the industry inside out. 

Our experts provide actionable insights directly on the page to enhance your script’s characters, story, pacing, and dialogue, ensuring it stands out in a competitive market.

Why Choose Script Reader Pro?

At Script Reader Pro, we are committed to balancing outstanding creativity with insightful industry know-how. Our unique approach ensures your concept not only shines but also aligns with industry trends and expectations. Here’s what sets us apart:

Scene-by-Scene Insights

Receive comprehensive reader reactions to your characters, story, pacing, dialogue, and more.

Genre Specialists

Work with experts who specialize in your script’s genre, ensuring targeted and relevant feedback.

Detailed Analysis

Receive comprehensive on-the-page notes, offering a deeper understanding of your script’s strengths and areas for improvement.

Follow-Up Support

Enjoy three free follow-up questions and friendly approach designed to help you refine your script and achieve your creative goals.

Our Margin Notes Service

 At Script Reader Pro, we understand that writers have different preferences for receiving feedback. 

While our coverage service offers an overview of our recommendations in a separate document, our Margin Notes service provides comments directly on the page.

This approach allows you to experience reader reactions in real-time, offering a more immersive and immediate understanding of how your script is perceived.

What You Get:

  • On-the-page notes 

  • Scene-by-scene analysis

  • Feedback from a pro

  • Choice of genre specialist

  • 3 free follow-up questions

Effective feedback can elevate a script from

good

to

great

TV Pilot 
Margin Notes

From $349
On-the-page notes up to 65 pages
Scene-by-scene TV pilot analysis
Feedback from a pro
Choice of genre specialist
3 free follow-up questions

Feature Film Margin Notes

From $499
On-the-page notes up to 125 pages
Scene-by-scene feature film analysis
Feedback from a pro
Choice of genre specialist
3 free follow-up questions
*This price is for TV scripts up to 65 pages and feature scripts up to 125 pages
If yours is longer, you’ll be able to purchase extra pages during checkout, at $4 per page over 125.

How the Process Works

Get a DIY action plan on how to upgrade your script, page-by-page, scene-by-scene, from a pro screenwriter.

1.

Choose Your Screenwriter

Select from our list of available pros who specialize in your script’s genre.

2.

Choose Turnaround Time

Select from our list of available pros who specialize in your script’s genre.

3.

Upload Your Script

Send us your script in professional screenplay software, such as Final Draft, along with any notes for your chosen pro.

4.

Receive Expert Feedback

Relax and let our professionals provide detailed, actionable feedback directly on your script.

Success Stories

Join the ranks of successful writers who have transformed their scripts with our Margin Notes. 
Here’s what they have to say:
  • I ordered Margin Notes + 2 Readers + RUSH. The notes were returned under 48 hours without compromising quality. Script Reader Pro is the best screenwriting service out there.

    JASON CHAN

    Happy Customer
  • The Margin Notes feedback was incredibly specific and detailed. I wouldn't use any other service again.

    SONJA CROCKFORD

    Happy Customer
  • I've used Script Reader Pro twice: Margin Notes and Line Edit. The feedback was insightful, and the strengths were highlighted. I'll definitely use Script Reader Pro again.

    RENITA FRIESE

    Happy Customer
  • I was looking for feedback on my script and needed something beyond one page of notes, so I opted for the margin on the page notes and was not disappointed. My reader pointed-out not only technical and creative areas where I could correct or make clear, but also gave me a sense of how my script would be perceived by creatives and pointers on how to keep the reader reading. My next draft feels like what I originally intended and more streamlined to keep the reader turning pages. Well worth it.

    SAM

    Happy Customer
  • You won’t regret using Script Reader Pro if you’re serious about taking your writing to the next level.

    FRANK APPIO

    Happy Customer
SCRIPT READER PRO'S industry EXPERTS

Match Your Script’s Genre with 
a Pro Screenwriter

Pick one of our pros to perform your service depending on their genre specialty.

These are the available pros for this service:

Scott Parisien

Genre Specialities: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Thriller
Pro experience: Incision, Foxter & Max, plus many specs in development. 

Pro services: Script doctor, script reader, mentor.
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Cody Smart

Genre Specialities: Dramedy, Comedy, Drama
Pro experience: Sold many scripts, extensive ghost writing, UCLA instructor. 

Pro services: Script doctor, script reader, mentor.
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Dash Finley

Genre Specialities: Thriller, Horror, Drama
Pro experience: Worked with/hired by Doug Liman, Stanley Weiser, Jason Kliot.
 
Pro services: Script doctor, script reader, mentor.
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Tennyson E. Stead

Genre Specialities: Drama, Comedy Action/Adventure
Pro experience: Atlas Uprising, Igor, Making the GAMP. Written 30 scripts, sold 10. 

Pro services: Script doctor, script reader, mentor.
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Frequently Asked Questions

What if my script is longer than the limit?

You can purchase extra pages during checkout at $4 per page over 125.

What if I need more than just coverage?

We offer script doctoring and full rewrites to suit your needs. Because sometimes your script needs more than just a Band-Aid.

Will you use A.I. to provide feedback?

Absolutely not. Our feedback is crafted by human screenwriters with decades of hard-won experience.

Can you guarantee that I’ll break in after using your services?

No guarantees in this subjective business. We can’t promise you’ll secure an agent, manager, sale, or win a contest. Be cautious of any consultancy that does.

But why do I even need feedback from a pro?

Even professional screenwriters seek feedback. An outsider’s perspective can be invaluable in identifying your script’s strengths and areas for improvement.
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